Writing this paper has been a challenge. I really thought it was going to be a lot easier. I guess the hardest part has been to be able to find the inspiration to write. As some of my classmates point out my paper needs a lot more writing, but it seems that I haven’t be able to find the words or the time for it. I like one of the comments; it was very useful and gave me details about things I have to fix. But the other one was not to nice “at least I feel like it was”.
I know I have to work on my paper a lot more and I think I have good sources with a lot of information. My plan is to work on it this weekend and take to be revising at the writing center on Monday.
So hopefully it will be great and long enough.