Monthly Archives: March 2012

Revision Process






The last two weeks of this revision process have been very interesting.  I had to make a lot of changes in my essay.There was a lot to add to the conclusion of my paper. I felt that the conclusion needed it something that makes the reader think about what I wrote. I worked very hard to make this paper the best. I believe that my essay should get an A. The reason why, is because the research I did for this paper was very extensive. I also put a lot of work on the grammar and revision process. I am very happy with this paper and I hope I get and A.

Good Luck to all my classmates with their papers.


Posted by on March 25, 2012 in Uncategorized


Peer Review Process for Essay two


After posting my essay in the discussion board I am very thankful for the nice comments about my paper. I just hope that all those wonderful comments are true and my paper is a work of art. LOL!

I did have some suggestion about thing that I need to fix. One comment that I got is about the works cited page, it was from Tracy Stinson, and it was very useful because she let me know that I need to put the title of the books in Italics, so I was able to fix that. Also Christine Salleng told me that some of my paragraphs are a little short, and today I am working on that as well. Then Kiah Brown suggests that I need to use more transition words because in some parts of my paper it gets a little confusing.

I will like to thank a lot to all of my classmates for all the great suggestions, they were a big help. I am working on a lot of things for this paper and also I am taking my paper to the writing center next Monday. This has been a great experience and a big help.

Good luck to every one!!

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Posted by on March 13, 2012 in Uncategorized