After listening to the comments of Professor Stacy about my essay, I have to say that I am very frustrated. I know she is right, she knows better than me what a good essay is. But I really don’t have any idea of how to fix it. She asks me to write a stronger thesis and to put more analysis in my sentences. Today I am going to email the writing center for help. I am going to use the email option for the first time because their schedule is not compatible with my working hours. I am very concern about my grade in this essay and I don’t know what to do. I hope at that at the end I would be able to have a great essay and a good grade.